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Nice little cuban flare to this song.

Would like to see more original work on Newgrounds rather than covers, but this is a nice little flair to a popular song which really help make Gears of War stick out in your head with that commerical.

Nice chilled out guitar

Pretty good guitar playing, nice chilled out melody, would love to see this used in an entire song with some solid lyrics.

tijnn responds:

hehe it's already there, just not been able to record it, stays with just the guitars for now. Thx for the review though :)

Sounds good dude.

Sounds good kid, keep it up, practice the vocals a bit, try to mix up the guitar sounds and song progression. But it sounds like the next blink. Keep it up.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks alot! by blink, do you mean blink-182? if so, that's awesome.

thanks again, and keep making the great music you do!

-eo

Tight Beat.

Got a great start going on here, you could easily finish this, just repeat what you already have like two times, make it die down, build it back up, etc. It's all about progression, and then change it up a bit for the bridge. I like what you have so far though. Keep it up!

p4c responds:

hehe ill take ur advice, though with a caveat... i dont just like raw repetition, i think i definately need to innovate in synth structure and elements in the piece. but, yeah, i dont think itll be that hard to expand it. thanks for taking a look!

Like the tone

Nice progressions, love the overall tone and feel to the song. Ends kind of abrupt though and it could use some more depth like a bridge and whatnot, but this is a good start.

Laytorest responds:

Thanks... I noticed the ending too... I'll try and do better, if I can.

Like the guitar effects.

Unfortunately I can't get over the cheesy sounding key board. But I love the fact that you recorded actual instruments.

Sounds good bro.

Nice recording, everything sounds clean, precise, and well played. Listen to some of my shit and see if your interested in my vocals. Wouldn't mind giving you a hand when I'm bored.

Dimoria responds:

Yeah sure , I'll listen right away :)
Thanks for the kind words.

Way to shred

Interesting hooks, nice clean recording, way to tear it up. Keep it up.

too short, ends abrupt.

Nice potential, good selection of clips, nice progression, ends abruptly, and is really short for a techno song. Most techno songs are like crazy long. Keep working on it.

Use better sounds.

This sounds like it would be like for Wii Fit, this would be the credit music or something, very japanese cheesy anime esk. You've got a good start, just get some cooler sounds, you've got the song layout progression down. Try again!

Laytorest responds:

Jeeze... I see a lot of my 'music' works well with certain games... That actually help me... Thanks.

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