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I agree with below.

Get rid of the reverb or just take it back a few notches and add those elements that come into the song later in the front of the other elements and you've got yourself a winner.

headbang87 responds:

yeah I'll work on this! thanks for reviewing/enjoying!
EDIT: changed the song

Great Production.

PRO:

*Everything is mixed great
*Everything sounds tight and perfectly in sync
*The guitar solos are talented
*This sounds like a song you'd hear out of "Heavy Metal" the movie way back in the day during one of their little animation montages.

OVERALL:

*Great stuff, classic melody, super tight playing skills. I'll have to check out your guys' other stuff. Love it. And I'm generally not a fan of classic rock, but this rules.

Musical-Pants responds:

Thanks, check "To the Future" on my profile. And maybe "Someday" too. Oh yeah, there's "Clubbed To Death-Electric".
Thanks a bunch for the review, I think this is our most accomplished work to date.

-Pants

Nice laid back melody.

I dug it, would like to see it in a song construction format, with lyrics, and you guys get yourselves a real band with a bassist and a drummer, etc. This'll be golden.

tijnn responds:

We have a real band with a bassist, drummer, singsonalachacha and 2 guitars. And we are working on this song currently. All we miss are the lyrics just yet.

Nice chilled out guitar

Pretty good guitar playing, nice chilled out melody, would love to see this used in an entire song with some solid lyrics.

tijnn responds:

hehe it's already there, just not been able to record it, stays with just the guitars for now. Thx for the review though :)

Sounds good dude.

Sounds good kid, keep it up, practice the vocals a bit, try to mix up the guitar sounds and song progression. But it sounds like the next blink. Keep it up.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks alot! by blink, do you mean blink-182? if so, that's awesome.

thanks again, and keep making the great music you do!

-eo

Tight Beat.

Got a great start going on here, you could easily finish this, just repeat what you already have like two times, make it die down, build it back up, etc. It's all about progression, and then change it up a bit for the bridge. I like what you have so far though. Keep it up!

p4c responds:

hehe ill take ur advice, though with a caveat... i dont just like raw repetition, i think i definately need to innovate in synth structure and elements in the piece. but, yeah, i dont think itll be that hard to expand it. thanks for taking a look!

Like the tone

Nice progressions, love the overall tone and feel to the song. Ends kind of abrupt though and it could use some more depth like a bridge and whatnot, but this is a good start.

Laytorest responds:

Thanks... I noticed the ending too... I'll try and do better, if I can.

Sounds good bro.

Nice recording, everything sounds clean, precise, and well played. Listen to some of my shit and see if your interested in my vocals. Wouldn't mind giving you a hand when I'm bored.

Dimoria responds:

Yeah sure , I'll listen right away :)
Thanks for the kind words.

too short, ends abrupt.

Nice potential, good selection of clips, nice progression, ends abruptly, and is really short for a techno song. Most techno songs are like crazy long. Keep working on it.

Use better sounds.

This sounds like it would be like for Wii Fit, this would be the credit music or something, very japanese cheesy anime esk. You've got a good start, just get some cooler sounds, you've got the song layout progression down. Try again!

Laytorest responds:

Jeeze... I see a lot of my 'music' works well with certain games... That actually help me... Thanks.

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